https://www.wikihow.com/Make-a-Doll-Hospital
It’d be great if someone could look this over and offer some feedback. Thanks.
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Theres quite a lot of first person statements. Maybe you could try to replace them?
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Also, I’m confused as to why it got tagged as a stub
It looks like there’s not much content in the article. Maybe try adding more steps or another method?
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Could you tell me who the article would be useful for? It seems like it’s targeted at kids but I’m not sure if they’d understand some of the words. It also seems quite unlikely that people would search for this.
Hi,
Uniqueor has made some good points.
The steps are very informative. It looks like you have a great deal of interest in hospitals and this gameplay. It is tagged as stub because it is definitely a good article. Incomplete articles get deleted for being incomplete. And inaccurate ones get marked for deletion in the same way. Good articles that need to get better with some more input get marked as stubs.
I think why it is marked as stub because, it says Make a. Usually, people construe it to mean making a 3D model with cardboard. Your article speaks about playing hospital
at home. It is meant for kids, preteens or whoever wants to play it. So, there’s a contradiction. You can help your article by putting a title change request to something like, Play Doll Hospital (or something in that line) at home. Siblings and friends on a sleepover can have great fun with this idea. That’s what comes to my mind.
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I’m not sure that changing the title would make the article better.
