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Ok
I did a spark of the moment poem a while ago. It’s not finished, but I’ll post what I have in just a sec
Can I post too? I don’t want to ruin what you’ve got going here
It’s pretty bad since I improvised all the way through, so be warned.
Poem of Sorts
She leapt like a deer,
Foundering near,
Was a terror-ridden horse.
She turn’d round to face,
The flying mace,
Of the terror’s black hand.
She ducked, and she ran,
Fearing more than
The terror, death.
She dodged between trees,
With knocking knees,
Would the terror catch her?
She tripped on a root,
Heard
This was an English assignment
The Man with the Hoe (a Reprise) “No society can surely be flourishing and happy, of which the far greater part of the members are poor and miserable.” -Adam Smith Leaning heavily on his hoe, Man bears the weight of his family and his future. Will he provide enough to flourish? Or will he fall to the ground, Unable to withstand the heavy hardship he holds? Is this what Man was made for? Was he created to reflect our Lord God? If so, how is this fulfilling His plan? Is Man’s endless greed satisfactory to Him? Or will Man never live up to His grand design? Man longs to gaze at the heavens, To touch the stars as if they were made just for him, To frolic through the fields, with no uneasiness in sight, To soak up the sun, to feel the warmth of daylight on his skin, To be free to relax without anguish or concern. Man, far and wide, how will you honor Both your family and your Father? Will you fizzle out, like a firework in the dead of night, Or will you prosper, like the petunia, Firmly rooted, but ever reaching for the stars?
That’s amazing! Inspiring! I don’t have good enough words in the English language to compliment it ;D
Thank you! Yours was incredible!! I want to read more!!
Fit In: Madison L
I do not know how to talk
like most people do
How to breeze through a conversation
Like I am not afraid to speak
How to ask the right questions
or carry myself
Like someone worth knowing
I feel like I am calling out to people
But they’re tuned into a different frequency
My messages are just never getting through
I am terrified that this is so obvious
From the outside you can see
A disconnect between me
and the rest of the world
I am so worried that I am not the only one
That matters how alone I am.
there! I finally found it!!!
Aw, really? I know it needs a lot of work
That’s terrific @Madison1287
! It’s very moving

We shall all trade more, this is awesome
Definitely! I might send another later, I think this’ll be a long night