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QuestionCould the villain win in the end?Community AnswerYes. The story where the good guys die and the bad guys win always gets interest, so you could totally make the villain win. Just make sure it fits the mood of your story. (If you're writing a fairy tale, the "dragon" should probably be defeated at the end.)
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QuestionMy story has 9 villains who are forced to help each other. How do I make there unlikely joining believable when they're all very different?Community AnswerYou'll need to find a personal motivation for each to unite toward the common cause. As long as each villain's motivation is consistent with his or her character and personality, it will be believable. Introducing conflict among the villains on the team may make it even more believable.
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QuestionCan the villain be the protagonist in a story?Community AnswerHe/she could be. I don't know if I would call a villain the protagonist, but he/she could be the main character.
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QuestionCan the villain be a teenager?Evans HaleCommunity AnswerOf course! Luke of Percy Jackson and the Olympian series is a teenager, for example. Just make sure the villain has his or her reasons to turn bad, and give them some fatal flaws. Because they're a teenager, they might be prone to making a lot of mistakes due to inexperience.
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QuestionI am working on a story where my villain is only now emerging, and has no previous record of evil deeds. Will this be a problem?Community AnswerNo! Your villain doesn't even need to be evil. The only thing that separates them from being just another character is the fact that they oppose the protagonist.
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QuestionWhat if I want my villain to be an animal, like the Xenomorph from Alien or the Yautja from Predator?Community AnswerThat's a bit trickier, since (at least in those examples) the villain can't communicate with the protagonist on any intelligible level. Because they're impossible to humanize (unless you were to tell the story from their perspective, which would be one HECK of a cool read IMO), they become more like an "abstract concept," like the WikiHow mentioned. In that case, I'd read/watch a lot of mystery/horror movies involving monstrous creatures as a reference, and remember to keep the creature mysterious and hard to pin down! If it's too obvious where it came from or what its abilities are, it becomes predictable and stops being scary.
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QuestionMy villain will only be a small character in my story. Is this okay?Community AnswerWell, unless your protagonist has other more grand obstacles standing in his/her way, you might want to consider making your villain a more central character, seeing as the only thing that keeps a reader flipping pages is the desire to see how a hero overcomes the struggles presented in the story.
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QuestionI want my villain's main motive to be revenge against wrongdoings done to him. Is this a good motive?Community AnswerAbsolutely! A motive like that humanizes your villain, makes him relatable, and gives him more complexity as a character
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QuestionHow can I transform my villain into a good character?Community AnswerYou can have your villain realize that being evil is not beneficial and decide to make amends with the protagonist.
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QuestionHow do I name my villain?Community AnswerThe same way you'd name a hero. It can be based on their physical traits, their powers (if they have them) or talents, their personality, or maybe even just their normal name if they don't do the whole secret identity thing. Also, try to avoid obviously "evil" names (i.e. Raven Broodblood, Lord Hatemonger, Mister McDeath, Damion Darkwing Crowblade), unless it's something like satire or parody. These "oh-so evil" names tend to sound clever in your head, but come across on paper/screen as campy/jokey, which is bad if you want the story/character to be taken seriously.
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QuestionI want my villain to represent what my protagonist could be if she doesn't learn my lesson. Is this a good idea, and do you have any tips for me?E. B.Community AnswerThis is actually a good idea, in my opinion. It might take a bit more work to make it believable, but it is a good concept. I think the best thing you could do is make the villain similar to the hero. Make them have similar traits. Or make the villain have something that would prove crucial to the hero's life or journey.
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QuestionCan a villain be both good and bad?Community AnswerOf course. A villain could have good intentions (bringing peace to the world), but be very misguided in his approach (killing all those who oppose his plans for peace). A villain with intentions that aren't entirely self-centered or evil makes for a much more believable character. A villain could share many of the same beliefs and goals of the hero, but go about achieving them in a completely different ("evil") way.
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QuestionIn my script, my villain is blackmailing my hero into doing something, in that the villain will do something to his girlfriend. Any ideas?Community AnswerHaving the villain kidnap or try to kill the girlfriend is over used. Be creative. Though hurting loved ones is a believable plan for a villain to get what he wants, using a girlfriend as the target can be a bit cliché if you're not careful. If the villain has magic powers or such, he could make the girlfriend forget the boyfriend, or something along those lines. Having something a bit different attracts more people to your story and will make it more popular.
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QuestionAre there any precautions I need to take in order to stop the reader from sympathizing with the villain when my protagonist is an antihero?Community AnswerPerhaps you could make the villain go further than your antihero would, or step over a moral boundary even they wouldn't cross. For example, the Punisher is an antihero, but he only kills criminals worse than himself, who often are beyond redemption. It's a difficult task, but the key is to make the protagonist (hero or antihero) more sympathetic than your villain. It's great for a villain to have a backstory, but it should serve as an explanation for their evil.
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QuestionCan a protagonist join the villain's side in a story?Community AnswerOf course! Maybe the protagonist's view of the world changes, or a poor moral judgment was made that turns them. Whatever the cause, the protagonist can always join the villain.
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QuestionIs it a good idea not to show or tell my villain's motivation until the end of my story as a twist?Community AnswerTheoretically, it could work. You could make your villain hide his true motives to keep the reader guessing. He could come across as a really nice guy who even goes out of his way to help solve the mystery even though he's the cause of it. However, it's not an original idea (very few writing ideas are these days), so put some effort into making the story interesting, plausible and likable rather than trying to make it seem like nobody's ever thought of this approach before.
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QuestionCan I create a unique dinosaur villain with sentience, motive, backstory, personal connection to the dinosaur hero, and a logical grand plan?Bananasplit2828Community AnswerYes, it is definitely possible! A logical grand plan, along with a well-developed backstory and personal connection to the hero, can make your villain unique and compelling.
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QuestionIs it okay if two villains join the protagonist's side, the protagonist becomes the antagonist, but they all become friends in the end?Bananasplit2828Community AnswerThe story sounds interesting, but it might be a bit confusing for readers. Consider simplifying the plot to maintain clarity and ensure the audience follows the character development.
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QuestionHow can I make a good character slowly turn evil?Corvid 9Community AnswerThey can learn things, or a power can start to take over them. They might even start to see that heroes cannot save anyone and decide in a twisted way that villains are good.
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QuestionWhat if the villain is family to the protagonists, such as an uncle and son? And in my story, the son of the villain who used to be one but is now a hero, how do I sympathize with him as the writer?Corvid 9Community AnswerTry to look for people in real life who kinda are like it. like mabye someone you know who became nice after being a bully.
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QuestionMy villain is a father who is forcefully doing marriage of his own son without his permission. What can I do to make him more interesting ?Corvid 9Community AnswerMaybe have him be greedy and only doing it for money, or you can make it so the father has had divorce. Anything can happen.
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QuestionWhat if a hero saves a dying villain's life through redemption before the villain dies? Would it be similar to Darth Vader saving Luke and Leia before his death?Snakey006550Top AnswererIf the hero saves the dying villain through redemption, it creates a powerful and emotional ending. The villain, once lost to darkness, finds purpose or peace before dying. This moment can show that even the worst people can change, but sometimes it’s too late for them to live with that change. The villain could protect the hero, make a final sacrifice, or share a last message of regret. Their death would be bittersweet—hopeful because they were redeemed, but sad because they couldn’t fully enjoy their redemption. This makes the hero’s victory emotional and meaningful.
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QuestionHow can I make my villain deep and realistic?Athena573Community AnswerGive your villain a complex backstory, such as experiencing trauma, which can help explain their motivations and actions.
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QuestionCan a hero fight a villain twice in a story?Aurélie Rosalind LaurelleCommunity AnswerYes, it happens in many stories and depends on whether it suits your narrative.
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QuestionHow can I make a villain likable?Aurélie Rosalind LaurelleCommunity AnswerShow moments of vulnerability to add humanity and give them a strong sense of humor. Provide a tragic backstory with poor treatment or trauma, explaining their turn from goodness to elicit sympathy.
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QuestionIs there another way for a villain to be redeemed through an act of pure love? How can a villain's loved one, such as a hero, save them from the monster they've become?Parnika KondapalleCommunity AnswerYou could reveal that the villain's butler is the true mastermind. When the villain realizes this, they can save the hero.
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QuestionCan a villain become good or return to being good?Bananasplit2828Community AnswerYes, villains can become good. Many stories feature redemption arcs where villains turn into good characters.
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QuestionCan a villain seek revenge against the hero?Athena573Community AnswerYes, especially if they were once friends; it provides a strong motive for the villain's revenge plot.
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QuestionCan my villain be the main character in a world where men have superpowers, and she is one of the only two girls with a superpower, driven by the way she's treated by men and boys?Athena573Community AnswerAbsolutely. It's reasonable that her mistreatment would motivate her to become a villain.
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QuestionHow could my villain, a cunning and powerful king who wields dark elemental magic to make himself immortal and invulnerable, be brought to justice?Bananasplit2828Community AnswerConsider if the villain's magic relies on an external object, like a staff or crown. The heroes could destroy this magical artifact, rendering him vulnerable.
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