Re: This UIB category
Ever since creating the wikiHow:Template subpages of UIBs
and working with simplifying these UIBs
, it’s come to my notice that there are still UIBs which don’t conform to our size specifications. However, I don’t know how to best simplify them without driving in ideas.
Expressing to simplify UIB lengths months ago, brought us from long-winded UIBs to much shorter UIBs (“This author” + no more than 6 words max.) However, some of those in this category don’t conform. They can’t be simplified without losing some of the details - but it’s okay - because some are already implied in their use. The ones I’m talking about are those which end in “drives as their primary means of transport” which for 1-2 of them became “as their primary transport method”.
Can we circle back and brainstorm ideas of how we can simplify these and still be within the 6 word maximum (not counting the obvious “This author”)?
Here are some of my thoughts.
- Omit the “as their primary means of transport”. It’s implied.
- Head towards simplification. Keep it simple, silly. As for the sample one, Stick to “This author drives.”
- We could add “drives a land vehicle,” “drives a car,” or “drives a (something else)” instead. But that might even be somewhat borderline so in a case-by-case method. Each of these would still get the idea that they primarily use their vehicle to get to their destinations.
- This could also be expressed for other transport methods - likes planes, flights and others. Now I’m just brainstorming some ideas to simplify them because more than 6 words past “This author” just makes them seem long-winded and unconforming.
In regards to those which refer to the author’s primary means of transport, perhaps they could be simplified to “This author primarily travels by ___” or “This author mainly uses a ___ for transport”?
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Ok. Thank you. These UIBs are now using this.
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