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I would like some feedback on the content of this page: http://www.wikihow.com/Improve-in-FPS-Games I haven’t added images yet, but am going to. For now, though, I just would like some feedback on the quality of information being presented in the above page. Thanks!

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Looks good to me, although I don’t play FPS. I’m just thinking that, to a person like me who doesn’t play them, it looks like it could help me a lot.

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Thanks, this is what I’m aiming towards, to give information that be helpful to others. =)

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Btw, added images.

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Feedback with the images appreciated. Thanks!

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At least some of the pictures don’t appear to go with the steps (as someone who’s never played FPS, I can’t vouch either for or against most of them, but the first definitely doesn’t). The pictures should have something to do specifically with the step, not just the entire article. If an article doesn’t have pictures, that isn’t necessarily a bad thing either.