help on article

Kammyisawesome September 6, 2019, 10:29am 1

i tried to start this article but it has a long way to go so any help on this or on any of my others would be very appreciated :)

https://www.wikihow.com/Avoid-Getting-Into-Trouble-with-a-Teacher-That-Hates-You?new=1

Sewing_Girl September 6, 2019, 9:20pm 3

I fixed a bit of grammar as well. I’ll see if I can help with the content; usually, I have a lot of information to give about these type of topics, but right now my mind is a blank.

Awesome_Aasim September 7, 2019, 1:28am 4

Hey @Kammyisawesome !

Unfortunately, the article is incomplete. The difference between “incomplete” and “stub” is that an article that is incomplete will not help readers. An article that is a stub can potentially help new readers but could use more information to be of great use. I recommend that you learn more about writing new articles here .

[EDIT]: I realize that you have had experience in writing good articles before. One of your articles got featured. But I still think it would be a good idea for you to review the new article guide to make sure you did not forget anything

Kammyisawesome September 7, 2019, 12:28pm 5

ok thanks a lot, i realize it wasn’t complete and i’ll try work on it :).

Kammyisawesome September 7, 2019, 12:29pm 6

Kammyisawesome September 7, 2019, 12:30pm 7

i’m a child but don’t feel comfortable saying my age, i’ll just say not 7 years old lol

Kammyisawesome September 7, 2019, 9:38pm 9

CPenguin17:

> > I fixed the spelling on some of your articles. Unfortunately, I can’t really help with content. By the way, are you a parent or a child? Just curious, because you seem to edit articles both about parenting topics and articles like this which are most relevant to students.
>
> i’m a child but don’t feel comfortable saying my age, i’ll just say not 7 years old lol

Ah, no problem, it’s perfectly reasonable to not give out your age online, I don’t do it either. Was just wondering because of your topic choices.

As to the articles — I’m not an expert, but the article on having a teen in Sims 2 with no parents looks quite good to me. Here some points I think you could improve (I’ve never played the game though, so omit what would be obvious to all players):

Step 4 — Get the teen sim a part-time job:

Why part-time? Why can’t it get a full-time job? Explanation would be good.

“Learn the vital skills for promotions” — I think you should mentions what skills exactly these are.

“try to go to work in a good mood” — Again, how do you keep a good mood before work? Also, why?

Step 5 — Decide whether your teen will go to school or not.

Maybe explain the advantages and disadvantages of going to school

What do you mean with “but you can always not get on”?
Otherwise, I think this article is good. I fixed the spelling and grammar a bit.

thank you for the suggestions, they are really good, i’ll definetely use them

Kammyisawesome September 7, 2019, 10:36pm 11

CPenguin17:

> > > > I fixed the spelling on some of your articles. Unfortunately, I can’t really help with content. By the way, are you a parent or a child? Just curious, because you seem to edit articles both about parenting topics and articles like this which are most relevant to students.
> > >
> > > i’m a child but don’t feel comfortable saying my age, i’ll just say not 7 years old lol
> >
> > Ah, no problem, it’s perfectly reasonable to not give out your age online, I don’t do it either. Was just wondering because of your topic choices.
> >
> >
> >
> > As to the articles — I’m not an expert, but the article on having a teen in Sims 2 with no parents looks quite good to me. Here some points I think you could improve (I’ve never played the game though, so omit what would be obvious to all players):
> >
> > - Step 4 — Get the teen sim a part-time job:
> > - Why part-time? Why can’t it get a full-time job? Explanation would be good.
> > - “Learn the vital skills for promotions” — I think you should mentions what skills exactly these are.
> > - “try to go to work in a good mood” — Again, how do you keep a good mood before work? Also, why?
> > - Step 5 — Decide whether your teen will go to school or not.
> > - Maybe explain the advantages and disadvantages of going to school
> > - What do you mean with “but you can always not get on”?
> > Otherwise, I think this article is good. I fixed the spelling and grammar a bit.
>
> thank you for the suggestions, they are really good, i’ll definetely use them

Oh, your article has been NFD as duplicate.But the method in the other article is quite different, maybe look at it and either merge so your useful information is preserved, or explain why it not duplicate. Must be frustrating to get so many of your articles deleted…

oh thats a shame, but i don’t mind too much, i checked it out and it does look pretty similar to mine, i can always write another article on the same topic and maybe that’ll work out.

anon74718567 September 7, 2019, 11:08pm 13

I play Sims 2 extensively - I can handle the merge if you’d like.

Kammyisawesome September 8, 2019, 12:20am 15

thank youplease do

Kammyisawesome September 8, 2019, 1:50am 17

thx

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