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For http://www.wikihow.com/Prevent-Obesity-in-Dogs
, it’s a great topic but I have some suggestions. ----------- Intro: I’d suggest changing it, and removing the “Here’s how”
sentence. http://www.wikihow.com/Write-Introductions-in-wikiHow-Articles
is a really good article to read. Step 3: Turn Step 3 into a pointer for Step 2. And some dogs eat more of one food than another, so I don’t think the, “Feed your large dog 1/4 of a cup three times a day,”
is quite accurate. Instead, it would be handy to include a summed up way of how to calculate a dog’s calorie requirement. Step 5: Include the researching part of this. At least for our kitty when we upgraded her food, we did lots of research and looking at ingredients first. Might also be nice to have what ingredients should and shouldn’t be in the food. ------------ And, ask a dog person for more, we’ve just had a cat.
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http://www.wikihow.com/Show-Your-Devotion-to-Your-Team
Intro: Again, remove that last sentence and make the intro longer. Step 1: Change the “Get”
to “Use and buy”
. Also, perhaps add something about printing/painting/etc. it’s logo on the items. Step 2: Add more. How can you publicly share your favorite team? Tell people in person, on social networks, and other. I think you get the points. Step 3: I’d recommend removing the “so you wont’ look silly”
part. And, you could add something about kind of liking teams, but not near the extent of your favorite. Step 4: Hmm. What exactly is “Stay true in all seasons”
supposed to mean? Is it basically just stay consistent? Step 5: Give some tips and ideas in a pointer. Someone will want to know a few things they could do to their room, not just that they can/should decorate it. Tips: I think you could merge the fourth and fifth. Other: Add relateds, weave links, see if there’s a proper video, and make sure it’s categorized.
