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QuestionCould the villain win in the end?Community AnswerYes. The story where the good guys die and the bad guys win always gets interest, so you could totally make the villain win. Just make sure it fits the mood of your story. (If you're writing a fairy tale, the "dragon" should probably be defeated at the end.)
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QuestionMy story has 9 villains who are forced to help each other. How do I make there unlikely joining believable when they're all very different?Community AnswerYou'll need to find a personal motivation for each to unite toward the common cause. As long as each villain's motivation is consistent with his or her character and personality, it will be believable. Introducing conflict among the villains on the team may make it even more believable.
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QuestionCan the villain be the protagonist in a story?Community AnswerHe/she could be. I don't know if I would call a villain the protagonist, but he/she could be the main character.
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QuestionCan the villain be a teenager?Evans HaleCommunity AnswerOf course! Luke of Percy Jackson and the Olympian series is a teenager, for example. Just make sure the villain has his or her reasons to turn bad, and give them some fatal flaws. Because they're a teenager, they might be prone to making a lot of mistakes due to inexperience.
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QuestionI am working on a story where my villain is only now emerging, and has no previous record of evil deeds. Will this be a problem?Community AnswerNo! Your villain doesn't even need to be evil. The only thing that separates them from being just another character is the fact that they oppose the protagonist.
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QuestionWhat if I want my villain to be an animal, like the Xenomorph from Alien or the Yautja from Predator?Community AnswerThat's a bit trickier, since (at least in those examples) the villain can't communicate with the protagonist on any intelligible level. Because they're impossible to humanize (unless you were to tell the story from their perspective, which would be one HECK of a cool read IMO), they become more like an "abstract concept," like the WikiHow mentioned. In that case, I'd read/watch a lot of mystery/horror movies involving monstrous creatures as a reference, and remember to keep the creature mysterious and hard to pin down! If it's too obvious where it came from or what its abilities are, it becomes predictable and stops being scary.
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QuestionMy villain will only be a small character in my story. Is this okay?Community AnswerWell, unless your protagonist has other more grand obstacles standing in his/her way, you might want to consider making your villain a more central character, seeing as the only thing that keeps a reader flipping pages is the desire to see how a hero overcomes the struggles presented in the story.
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QuestionI want my villain's main motive to be revenge against wrongdoings done to him. Is this a good motive?Community AnswerAbsolutely! A motive like that humanizes your villain, makes him relatable, and gives him more complexity as a character
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QuestionCan I make my villain turn good?Community AnswerYou can. You could have your villain realize that being evil won't get them anywhere in life and attempt to make amends with the protagonist(s).
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QuestionHow do I name my villain?Community AnswerThe same way you'd name a hero. It can be based on their physical traits, their powers (if they have them) or talents, their personality, or maybe even just their normal name if they don't do the whole secret identity thing. Also, try to avoid obviously "evil" names (i.e. Raven Broodblood, Lord Hatemonger, Mister McDeath, Damion Darkwing Crowblade), unless it's something like satire or parody. These "oh-so evil" names tend to sound clever in your head, but come across on paper/screen as campy/jokey, which is bad if you want the story/character to be taken seriously.
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QuestionI want my villain to represent what my protagonist could be if she doesn't learn my lesson. Is this a good idea, and do you have any tips for me?E. B.Community AnswerThis is actually a good idea, in my opinion. It might take a bit more work to make it believable, but it is a good concept. I think the best thing you could do is make the villain similar to the hero. Make them have similar traits. Or make the villain have something that would prove crucial to the hero's life or journey.
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QuestionCan a villain be both good and bad?Community AnswerOf course. A villain could have good intentions (bringing peace to the world), but be very misguided in his approach (killing all those who oppose his plans for peace). A villain with intentions that aren't entirely self-centered or evil makes for a much more believable character. A villain could share many of the same beliefs and goals of the hero, but go about achieving them in a completely different ("evil") way.
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QuestionIn my script, my villain is blackmailing my hero into doing something, in that the villain will do something to his girlfriend. Any ideas?Community AnswerHaving the villain kidnap or try to kill the girlfriend is over used. Be creative. Though hurting loved ones is a believable plan for a villain to get what he wants, using a girlfriend as the target can be a bit cliché if you're not careful. If the villain has magic powers or such, he could make the girlfriend forget the boyfriend, or something along those lines. Having something a bit different attracts more people to your story and will make it more popular.
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QuestionAre there any precautions I need to take in order to stop the reader from sympathizing with the villain when my protagonist is an antihero?Community AnswerPerhaps you could make the villain go further than your antihero would, or step over a moral boundary even they wouldn't cross. For example, the Punisher is an antihero, but he only kills criminals worse than himself, who often are beyond redemption. It's a difficult task, but the key is to make the protagonist (hero or antihero) more sympathetic than your villain. It's great for a villain to have a backstory, but it should serve as an explanation for their evil.
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QuestionCan a protagonist join the villain's side in a story?Community AnswerOf course! Maybe the protagonist's view of the world changes, or a poor moral judgment was made that turns them. Whatever the cause, the protagonist can always join the villain.
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QuestionIs it a good idea not to show or tell my villain's motivation until the end of my story as a twist?Community AnswerTheoretically, it could work. You could make your villain hide his true motives to keep the reader guessing. He could come across as a really nice guy who even goes out of his way to help solve the mystery even though he's the cause of it. However, it's not an original idea (very few writing ideas are these days), so put some effort into making the story interesting, plausible and likable rather than trying to make it seem like nobody's ever thought of this approach before.
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QuestionWhat should my villain, the mad scientist, be driven by?Otterly BadgerificTop AnswererPerhaps you could have a situation where your villain was once a reputable, well loved scientist who one day experienced a failed experiment that went so wrong it caused people to shun them. They could now have a drive to redeem themselves from that bad experience but in such a way that it involves taking dangerous shortcuts, doing weird experiments, using forbidden ingredients and misusing minions to do the dirty work, all in a hopeless attempt to regain the lost glory they once had.
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QuestionWhat if the villain is family to the protagonists, such as an uncle and son? And in my story, the son of the villain who used to be one but is now a hero, how do I sympathize with him as the writer?Corvid 9Community AnswerTry to look for people in real life who kinda are like it. like mabye someone you know who became nice after being a bully.
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QuestionMy villain's motive is that he was trying to be the hero. Is that good?PhantasmagoriaCommunity AnswerYes, "good intentions, bad results" is an excellent motivation for a villain. Villains who are certain they're in the right can be highly sympathetic and compelling characters.
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QuestionHow would I make a villain without powers relevant and threatening in a story where many characters have powers?PhantasmagoriaCommunity AnswerGive them something that makes them a threat specifically to the people with powers. The powered characters have to face a challenge in defeating the villain, and evening the gap between those with powers and the villain without would do exactly that. Whether it's a weapon, an ability, or something else, that villain would be effective if the main threat they pose is relevant to the powers the other characters have.
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QuestionMy story has five villains. Is it okay if they fight with each other?PhantasmagoriaCommunity AnswerYes. Villains can have conflicts with other villains, especially if their goals are in competition. If multiple villains want the same thing when only one can achieve it, it makes sense for them to fight. Conflicts between moral limits could also cause villains to clash. It all depends on your reasons, and what purpose their infighting serves.
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QuestionIs it a good idea that my hero and villain have similar stories, but they take different paths from their perspectives?PhantasmagoriaCommunity AnswerYes. A narrative or thematic parallel between your hero and villain is a fantastic idea. Contrasting what makes them different and what they have in common is an excellent way to enforce the themes of your story, and it can create compelling tension between the hero and the villain, and what drives them to conflict.
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QuestionI've had trouble finding a backstory for my villain. I’ve decided that the villain turned evil because of something, and he thinks no one understands what he has gone through. Any tips for backstory ideas?PhantasmagoriaCommunity AnswerThe first thing to ask is whether "no one" applies more to a select few people who are close to him or society as a whole. If the problem is with his immediate connections, his experience should be highly personal. Perhaps it's ruined a specific relationship in his life, someone abandoned him over it, or the perceived lack of sympathy formed a grudge. If the problem is with society, the event will be on a larger, more cultural scale. Perhaps he's a victim of a stigmatized form of violence or something that society demands he endure without complaint. Consider the scale of who your villain conflicts with.
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QuestionMy story has no villain. I feel like one is needed for a proper plot and development, but I can't seem to fit one in without being ridiculous.Community AnswerAs long as you can make your story entertaining, you don’t need a villain. If it is a comedy, focus on making the reader laugh. If not, you may just have a few antagonising forces without a main villain.
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QuestionIs it okay for the villain and the hero to secretly be in love?Serine OhCommunity AnswerYes, this creates an interesting bond. In the end, you could have them confess to each other.
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QuestionI'm trying to created a main character as a Villain and this type of Main Character is having Sadistic personality disorder + Machiavellianism + Psychopath. Does it remind you of some old character?Serine OhCommunity AnswerMany villains have the same personality. Make sure you know how to make your villain stand out, like giving them a significant backstory or lots of presence. Usually, the best sadistic villains don't explicitly say or have people say they are sadistic or evil but have the readers or viewers take in or assume the mood/personality of the villain.
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QuestionHello, I intend to make a villain girl with dark powers. How to write a "spoiled brat" villain without falling into cliches?Serine OhCommunity AnswerDon't make your villain too enthusiastic or avid. Make them calmer and more callous, so they give off a mysterious tone that shows they are not eager to get anything more than what they have right now. In simpler terms, give an arrogant or cocky side of them that proves they're not spoiled.
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QuestionHow can I make sure that my villain does not 'overshadow' the hero? How can I create a villain that complements the hero/hero team?Serine OhCommunity AnswerMake your villain scary, but focus on the hero for most of the plot. Readers or viewers will get more familiar with the hero the more they get to "spend time" with them. Give your villain many evil parts, but make your hero a more significant part of the story.
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QuestionI am writing a Harry Potter fanfic set in the Middle Ages. Is it necessary for my main character to have someone to oppose him?Community AnswerThat's up to you. However, Harry Potter is known for its climactic hero-vs.-villain battles, so it's probably a good idea.
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QuestionI have a father and son who are villains. At first the son was gonna be the villain but now I want to make the father the villain. Now the son doesn't have much of a role. What do i do?Serine OhCommunity AnswerMake sure they have completely different personalities. If the villain is sadistic and sociopathic, your hero must be aspiring and more mellow. Obviously, you don't have to do it that way and make your hero more malicious, but when 2 characters with opposite personalities interact, it's definitely more interesting.
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