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QuestionHow do I punctuate thoughts? Example: "It's a complicated mess," I thought to myself. Is this correct or without quotation marks?Community AnswerThis is correct. You can think of thoughts as speaking to yourself. As such, they are punctuated like any other sentence of dialogue.
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QuestionWhen a speaker interrupts himself and starts a different train of thought, is the first letter of the next thought capitalized? Example: "I didn't-as far as the-again, what I wanted to do..."Community AnswerThere is no exact rule covering this. However, most writers do not capitalize in that case. Side note: When writing in plain text, like here, where you can't create a real dash, you put spaces around the hyphen to denote that it is supposed to be a dash, not a hyphen. "I didn't - as far as the - again, what I wanted to do..."
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QuestionWhich is the correct punctuation? "I like to buy clothes," she said. "They are very fun." Or, "I like to buy clothes," she said. "They are very fun,".DonaganTop AnswererThe first is correct.
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QuestionHow do I denote an emphatic question such as, "What did you say!?" With the statement in italics ending with a question mark, or in another way?DonaganTop AnswererThere are three possibilities: (1) Use italics followed by a question mark but no exclamation point (mark); (2) No italics, but use a question mark followed by an exclamation point; (3) No italics, but end with two (or more) question marks. There's no "right" way to do it. Try them all and see which one you like best.
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QuestionHow do I punctuate this: I said stop it! Like this: 'I said stop it!' or like this: "I said "Stop it!"?DonaganTop AnswererDepending on which rule of quotation marks you follow, it should be: I said, "Stop it!" or I said, 'Stop it!'.
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QuestionWhat is the definition of the "." punctuation mark?DonaganTop AnswererA period or full stop (.) is the punctuation mark that comes at the end of a declarative sentence. It is also used at the end of many abbreviations and sometimes after each letter in an acronym. When called a "dot," it is typically used in website addresses.
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QuestionHow would I punctuate the following sentence? "That I don't know."DonaganTop AnswererIt doesn't require punctuation except for the period at the end.
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QuestionHow do I add on to a piece of dialogue that is already a complete sentence?DonaganTop AnswererRemove the closing quotation mark, then add to the existing sentence, or add another sentence (or more). Then use closing punctuation, followed by a closing quotation mark.
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QuestionHow do I punctuate an action in a play script?DonaganTop AnswererThe action (or stage direction) is usually noted inside brackets or parentheses.
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QuestionHow do I punctuate someone paraphrasing another person, such as during an interview? For example, X told me Y said ___, but it's not an exact quote.DonaganTop AnswererX told me that Y said he was unhappy about how the movie ended. (Don't use quotation marks.)
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QuestionIs this correct when showing a tag in the middle of a quote? "I said," she began, "you are very cruel."Community AnswerYes! Unless you are in a British English speaking area, in which the punctuation not included in the quote would be placed outside of the quotation marks.
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