Open with a formal greeting and note of thanks for the offer of the job.
Dear Ms. Chase,
Thank you so much for the offer of this position! I am looking forward to getting started and discovering more about what Career Caterers offers its clients, and how I can be a valuable contributor to the business. The application process has been exciting and challenging, and I am grateful to have been a successful candidate.
The second paragraph will clearly state your expected salary and the justification for this number. Aim for a number a few thousand more than you hope for, to allow room for comfortable negotiation.
I believe that my vast experience in the industry — nearly 10 years as a high-end chef — and my formal training at the French School of Culinary Arts make me a highly valuable addition to your company. I propose a salary of $65,000 to 70,000, which is comparable to other chefs of my experience and skill.
If some variables of your agreement are not yet finalized, such as medical or dental benefits, confirm you are flexible in terms of how you will be compensated.
I am open to some negotiation based on the amount additional factors might alter my income overall, such as health benefits.
Close by thanking the employer once more. Use a tone of expectancy.
Once again, I am excited to join your team of high-end catering staff. Thank you for offering me this prestigious position, and I await your response with eagerness!
Sincerely,
Chef Karen Doke