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  • Question
    Could the villain win in the end?
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    Yes. The story where the good guys die and the bad guys win always gets interest, so you could totally make the villain win. Just make sure it fits the mood of your story. (If you're writing a fairy tale, the "dragon" should probably be defeated at the end.)
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    My story has 9 villains who are forced to help each other. How do I make there unlikely joining believable when they're all very different?
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    You'll need to find a personal motivation for each to unite toward the common cause. As long as each villain's motivation is consistent with his or her character and personality, it will be believable. Introducing conflict among the villains on the team may make it even more believable.
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    Can the villain be the protagonist in a story?
    Community Answer
    He/she could be. I don't know if I would call a villain the protagonist, but he/she could be the main character.
  • Question
    Can the villain be a teenager?
    Evans Hale
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    Of course! Luke of Percy Jackson and the Olympian series is a teenager, for example. Just make sure the villain has his or her reasons to turn bad, and give them some fatal flaws. Because they're a teenager, they might be prone to making a lot of mistakes due to inexperience.
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    I am working on a story where my villain is only now emerging, and has no previous record of evil deeds. Will this be a problem?
    Community Answer
    No! Your villain doesn't even need to be evil. The only thing that separates them from being just another character is the fact that they oppose the protagonist.
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    What if I want my villain to be an animal, like the Xenomorph from Alien or the Yautja from Predator?
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    That's a bit trickier, since (at least in those examples) the villain can't communicate with the protagonist on any intelligible level. Because they're impossible to humanize (unless you were to tell the story from their perspective, which would be one HECK of a cool read IMO), they become more like an "abstract concept," like the WikiHow mentioned. In that case, I'd read/watch a lot of mystery/horror movies involving monstrous creatures as a reference, and remember to keep the creature mysterious and hard to pin down! If it's too obvious where it came from or what its abilities are, it becomes predictable and stops being scary.
  • Question
    My villain will only be a small character in my story. Is this okay?
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    Well, unless your protagonist has other more grand obstacles standing in his/her way, you might want to consider making your villain a more central character, seeing as the only thing that keeps a reader flipping pages is the desire to see how a hero overcomes the struggles presented in the story.
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    I want my villain's main motive to be revenge against wrongdoings done to him. Is this a good motive?
    Community Answer
    Absolutely! A motive like that humanizes your villain, makes him relatable, and gives him more complexity as a character
  • Question
    How can I transform my villain into a good character?
    Community Answer
    You can have your villain realize that being evil is not beneficial and decide to make amends with the protagonist.
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    How do I name my villain?
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    The same way you'd name a hero. It can be based on their physical traits, their powers (if they have them) or talents, their personality, or maybe even just their normal name if they don't do the whole secret identity thing. Also, try to avoid obviously "evil" names (i.e. Raven Broodblood, Lord Hatemonger, Mister McDeath, Damion Darkwing Crowblade), unless it's something like satire or parody. These "oh-so evil" names tend to sound clever in your head, but come across on paper/screen as campy/jokey, which is bad if you want the story/character to be taken seriously.
  • Question
    I want my villain to represent what my protagonist could be if she doesn't learn my lesson. Is this a good idea, and do you have any tips for me?
    E. B.
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    This is actually a good idea, in my opinion. It might take a bit more work to make it believable, but it is a good concept. I think the best thing you could do is make the villain similar to the hero. Make them have similar traits. Or make the villain have something that would prove crucial to the hero's life or journey.
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    Can a villain be both good and bad?
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    Of course. A villain could have good intentions (bringing peace to the world), but be very misguided in his approach (killing all those who oppose his plans for peace). A villain with intentions that aren't entirely self-centered or evil makes for a much more believable character. A villain could share many of the same beliefs and goals of the hero, but go about achieving them in a completely different ("evil") way.
  • Question
    In my script, my villain is blackmailing my hero into doing something, in that the villain will do something to his girlfriend. Any ideas?
    Community Answer
    Having the villain kidnap or try to kill the girlfriend is over used. Be creative. Though hurting loved ones is a believable plan for a villain to get what he wants, using a girlfriend as the target can be a bit cliché if you're not careful. If the villain has magic powers or such, he could make the girlfriend forget the boyfriend, or something along those lines. Having something a bit different attracts more people to your story and will make it more popular.
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    Are there any precautions I need to take in order to stop the reader from sympathizing with the villain when my protagonist is an antihero?
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    Perhaps you could make the villain go further than your antihero would, or step over a moral boundary even they wouldn't cross. For example, the Punisher is an antihero, but he only kills criminals worse than himself, who often are beyond redemption. It's a difficult task, but the key is to make the protagonist (hero or antihero) more sympathetic than your villain. It's great for a villain to have a backstory, but it should serve as an explanation for their evil.
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    Can a protagonist join the villain's side in a story?
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    Of course! Maybe the protagonist's view of the world changes, or a poor moral judgment was made that turns them. Whatever the cause, the protagonist can always join the villain.
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    Is it a good idea not to show or tell my villain's motivation until the end of my story as a twist?
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    Theoretically, it could work. You could make your villain hide his true motives to keep the reader guessing. He could come across as a really nice guy who even goes out of his way to help solve the mystery even though he's the cause of it. However, it's not an original idea (very few writing ideas are these days), so put some effort into making the story interesting, plausible and likable rather than trying to make it seem like nobody's ever thought of this approach before.
  • Question
    I've had trouble finding a backstory for my villain. I’ve decided that the villain turned evil because of something, and he thinks no one understands what he has gone through. Any tips for backstory ideas?
    Phantasmagoria
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    The first thing to ask is whether "no one" applies more to a select few people who are close to him or society as a whole. If the problem is with his immediate connections, his experience should be highly personal. Perhaps it's ruined a specific relationship in his life, someone abandoned him over it, or the perceived lack of sympathy formed a grudge. If the problem is with society, the event will be on a larger, more cultural scale. Perhaps he's a victim of a stigmatized form of violence or something that society demands he endure without complaint. Consider the scale of who your villain conflicts with.
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    Is it a good idea to make my villain appear benevolent at first, even though he became a villain due to a tragic backstory?
    Athena573
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    Yes, it's a great idea. Making the villain appear benevolent can create trust with the hero, allowing the villain to gain secret information that he could use for malicious purposes.
  • Question
    My story has no villain. I feel like one is needed for a proper plot and development, but I can't seem to fit one in without being ridiculous.
    Community Answer
    As long as you can make your story entertaining, you don’t need a villain. If it is a comedy, focus on making the reader laugh. If not, you may just have a few antagonising forces without a main villain.
  • Question
    I am writing a Harry Potter fanfic set in the Middle Ages. Is it necessary for my main character to have someone to oppose him?
    Community Answer
    That's up to you. However, Harry Potter is known for its climactic hero-vs.-villain battles, so it's probably a good idea.
  • Question
    Can there be an extremely big and problematic conflict between two villains?
    Corvid 9
    Community Answer
    Of course. Two villains could be fighting over something they both want or just fighting to move your story forward.
  • Question
    is it okay if my villain is really similar to Luke from Percy Jackson?
    Corvid 9
    Community Answer
    As long as it isn't almost the same character, then yes! If it is too similar, you won't be able to sell it.
  • Question
    How can I make a good character slowly turn evil?
    Corvid 9
    Community Answer
    They can learn things, or a power can start to take over them. They might even start to see that heroes cannot save anyone and decide in a twisted way that villains are good.
  • Question
    My villain is a father who is forcefully doing marriage of his own son without his permission. What can I do to make him more interesting ?
    Corvid 9
    Community Answer
    Maybe have him be greedy and only doing it for money, or you can make it so the father has had divorce. Anything can happen.
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    What if the villain is family to the protagonists, such as an uncle and son? And in my story, the son of the villain who used to be one but is now a hero, how do I sympathize with him as the writer?
    Corvid 9
    Community Answer
    Try to look for people in real life who kinda are like it. like mabye someone you know who became nice after being a bully.
  • Question
    How can I make my villain deep and realistic?
    Athena573
    Community Answer
    Give your villain a complex backstory, such as experiencing trauma, which can help explain their motivations and actions.
  • Question
    Is it okay if two villains join the protagonist's side, the protagonist becomes the antagonist, but they all become friends in the end?
    Bananasplit2828
    Community Answer
    The story sounds interesting, but it might be a bit confusing for readers. Consider simplifying the plot to maintain clarity and ensure the audience follows the character development.
  • Question
    Can I create a unique dinosaur villain with sentience, motive, backstory, personal connection to the dinosaur hero, and a logical grand plan?
    Bananasplit2828
    Community Answer
    Yes, it is definitely possible! A logical grand plan, along with a well-developed backstory and personal connection to the hero, can make your villain unique and compelling.
  • Question
    How could my villain, a cunning and powerful king who wields dark elemental magic to make himself immortal and invulnerable, be brought to justice?
    Bananasplit2828
    Community Answer
    Consider if the villain's magic relies on an external object, like a staff or crown. The heroes could destroy this magical artifact, rendering him vulnerable.
  • Question
    Can a hero fight a villain twice in a story?
    Aurélie Rosalind Laurelle
    Community Answer
    Yes, it happens in many stories and depends on whether it suits your narrative.
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