Lets have a ghost story…it will be more fun when we scare ourself while writing it…!!! let me have the first sentence… there was a couple who recently got married…called Mr and Mrs Golds
They heard noises in the basement
When they went to see what happened to the basement they were struck with machetes by invisible men
They escaped out of the house
After being healed they were given a temporary house
After being healed they were given a temporary house
They heard a loud knock at the door they were so frightened that…
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But when they do, they see someone giving an eerie screech, waving a bloodstained ax, taking a swing!
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And then, the character hit Mr. Gold in the chest! Blood gushed out of the fatal wound, staining the carpets!
Mrs gold was terrified to see the person because he looked very weird as his eyes were completely red…they were so red that his eyeballs were not visible
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Her husband just died, and she is afraid of someone’s eyes? I personally think you are a mediocrity regarding writing.
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I’ll judge whatever I want
The magic shop appeared very ghostly. She knocked on the door, and heard no reply, except for a haunting whisper…
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As she gets a good look, she soon smells something rather peculiar----something like ashes.
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“I know who you are, Annabel Golden.” the witch whispers. She raises her claw! “But after this, nobody else will!” she cackles, slicing her hand, ripping Mrs. Golden’s body open, the last thing heard was a scream…and the sickening seep of blood.
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She sighs, shrugs, and heads back home…but that’s not it!
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The man who revived her comes to visit and says his name “Mr Anderson is my name”
she saw the eyes of the ghost who killed her husband…they were really red
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This is kinda out of the story but… It’s funny how I can hear the wind blowing on a perfectly still night.
