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https://www.wikihow.com/Make-Costume-for-the-Ghostbusters

What do you suggest needs to be explained better or any ideas to make this article better. feel free to do any input or edits as you may see needs to be done. Format, steps, methods, different ways, grammar, category, …Thank you.

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I don’t know much about the Ghostbusters, but maybe the methods with one step could be combined in one big method or the methods could be expanded. 

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The format is kind of off, some of the parts need to combined. 

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Yes… Indeed you are both right

they all are mostly one method, and should be steps. That’s where I would need some help with the format and also someone to point out what needs to be more explained or seem more confusing

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I will read through the article and see what could be explained. 

Do you want the method headers to be removed?

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I trust your judgement @Hailey-Girges , Feel free to edit as you think it makes better sense.

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Here are some steps I think could be better explained. I think I could also edit some of it:

Step 1 of Method 4

Step 2 of Method 5

Step 5 of Method 5

I also think some steps could be combined into one large step. For example, step 7 in Method 5 could be merged with step 6. Those are my thoughts so far.

Edit: Okay, I’ll try to format it well and edit it so information makes sense.

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Okay, I will wait for your edits and I’ll work on expanding those steps and add detailed instructions from there

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Here are my edits: 

https://www.wikihow.com/index.php?title=Make-Costume-for-the-Ghostbusters&diff=21069440&oldid=21069098

I merged content and did a little copyediting. 

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Hailey did a nice job, the article is formatted more neatly now. 

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Thanks - maybe more editors will come and improve it.