How to Avoid Colloquial (Informal) Writing

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Colloquial, or informal, language is common and feels warm and friendly when we speak to friends and family. However, it isn't always appropriate or serious enough for academic writing. When you're writing an essay for school, a cover letter, or a scientific article, your language and tone should be formal, unemotional, and somewhat detached to show the seriousness of your message and intent. There are many ways to convert informal writing into formal prose. Build your vocabulary and choose more precise words over generalized or cliched phrases. Present a formal tone by avoiding emotional writing and exuding confidence to your readers. Finally, structure and organize your writing to convey a clear and coherent thesis.

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Choosing Formal Words

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  1. Improve your vocabulary to find better word choices. The best starting point for writing more formally is building a larger vocabulary. If you learn more words, you can replace nondescript words like “good” and “bad” with more formal alternatives like "beneficial," "positive," “negative,” or "deleterious." This helps you to avoid unnecessary repetition, add subtle nuances, and elevate your writing style. [1]
    • Reading widely is a great way to improve your vocabulary. Look for upper-level publications like The Atlantic or Foreign Affairs for articles with more advanced or more formal language registers. College-level books also have a wide selection of potential new words for you to learn.
    • Consider signing up for a “word of the day” app or website. These resources help you learn at least 1 new word every day.
  2. Contractions are combinations of 2 words. For example, “don’t” is a combination of “do not.” People use contractions when they speak all the time because it’s faster and sounds more natural, but formal writing prose should contain few or no contractions. Whenever you write, proofread to find any places where you might have accidentally used contractions and convert them to use the full words. [2]
    • Some other common contractions are “can’t,” “won’t,” “isn’t,” and “aren’t.” For a more formal tone, replace these words with “cannot,” “will not,” “is not,” and “are not.”
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  3. Formal writing is concise, clear, direct, and precise. Extra filler words make your tone sound less professional and precise. Go through your writing and find any broad or general words. Either replace them with more exact words or eliminate them altogether. [3]
    • Some imprecise words or phrases are “a lot,” “very,” or “totally.” Replace “a lot” with a more precise figure, like “12%.” “Very” and “totally,” in most cases, can be eliminated entirely.
    • Adverbs like “really” or “clearly” are usually filler words that don’t add much detail to your writing and can make your writing sound overly conversational. Reduce your use of adverbs to eliminate unnecessary words.
  4. A phrasal verb is a combination of a verb and a preposition that creates a phrase with a different meaning. These phrases are usually less formal than other words, so replace them with other words that convey the same message more specifically. [4]
    • For example, in the sentence “John put down the conclusions in last month’s study,” the phrasal verb “put down” makes the sentence sound informal. Writing “John dismissed the conclusions in last month’s study” instead makes the sentence more formal.
    • This is a case where building your vocabulary is very helpful. With a larger vocabulary, you can quickly replace phrasal verbs with strong verbs that stand alone and convey your meaning more forcibly.
    • Use a thesaurus or dictionary if you need help coming up with different words to replace phrasal verbs.
  5. Write in the third person in most situations. Generally, formal writing doesn’t use “I,” or “We.” Rather, write in the third person. [5] This means avoiding terms like "I" or "we." Instead, refer to “the team” or “this company.” This language keeps your writing fact-based and makes it somewhat more impersonal. [6]
    • One exception to this rule is in a cover letter or personal statement. In these documents, you should be writing about yourself specifically.
  6. Slang refers to very informal language that people commonly use around their friends. While it's fine to use in conversations, do not use any slang language in formal writing. Words like "cool," "chill out," or "hyped" don't belong in your writing. Replace them with more professional substitutes. Never use "textspeak" like "lol" or "omg." [7]
    • If you aren't sure about using a particular phrase, consider if it's something you often say when hanging out with your friends. If it is, then it's probably an informal slang term. Replace it or consult a dictionary, just to be sure it's acceptable for formal writing.
    • For example, if you were writing a professional review of an amusement park, don't use slang language like, "Everyone had a really cool time." Instead, say "The group had an enjoyable experience at the park."
    • There are many more slang terms and phrases, and the list grows every year. Try searching for a phrase you're considering using to see if it's been added to a list of slang terms. [8]
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Using Formal Language

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  1. All formal writing should have a confident, authoritative tone. Establish yourself as someone who knows what they’re talking about and command your readers’ respect. Using clear language, facts, and statistics helps to establish a confident tone. Also remove any words or phrases that make you sound unsure or nervous; they can easily reduce your credibility and take away from the seriousness of your message. Don't write, "It's a possibility that we could conclude..." Instead, say, "We can firmly conclude that..." Make sure all your writing conveys this tone. [9]
    • In a job cover letter, for example, phrases like “I think I am qualified” are not appropriate or helpful. Instead, convey confidence by simply stating “I am qualified for this position.”
    • Don’t present yourself as arrogant, however. Saying something to the effect of “You have no choice but to agree with my conclusions” is inappropriate. Instead, write “I am confident in my conclusions.” This clearly shows your authority while still showing respect for others who may have other opinions.
  2. Broad generalizations are not professional or formal. In a formal essay, qualify all of your statements. Tell your readers the point you're making right away and be perfectly upfront about what evidence you're using to support it. [10]
    • As an added bonus, using specific information helps you sound more confident.
    • Whenever possible, use figures, statistics, and evidence to support your point.
    • For example, writing that “Kids today spend too much time on the phone” is too general and doesn’t give your reader any evidence or statistics. Writing “In 2017, kids spent an average of 7 hours per day on their phones. The American Medical Association says that is an excessive amount,” provides a clear, precise statement that makes your point.
  3. Write in the active voice for most situations. The active voice is when the subject of the sentences is doing the action. In the passive voice, the subject receives the action. Both have their roles in academic writing, and the passive voice is occasionally useful for creating cohesion, maintaining an impersonal tone, or emphasizing the receiver of the action. However, you should use the active voice for formal writing as much as possible. The active voice is clearer, more concise, and sounds more professional and forcible than the passive voice. [11]
    • Determine if a sentence is in the active or passive voice by asking yourself, "Who or what is doing the action?"
    • In, "The door was opened by Mike," Mike is doing the action but the door is the subject. Switch it to "Mike opened the door" to convert the sentence to the active voice. It reads much better and keeps the emphasis on Mike instead of on an inanimate object.
  4. Clichés are statements that have been overused. They are usually too general and imprecise for a formal piece of writing. Replace any cliched statements with specific figures and information. [12]
    • Some common clichés are “raining cats and dogs,” “as strong as an ox,” “open the floodgates,” or “delicate as a rose.” Avoid using statements like these. Proofread your writing and remove any cliches to make your writing fresher and more descriptive.
  5. Never assume anyone’s gender, race, orientation, or other personal details while you’re writing. Use non-gendered and other generalized language when referring to people. [13]
    • “Their” is now accepted for singular use to avoid assuming gender. Rather than writing “The student handed his test to the teacher,” it is correct to write “The student handed their test to the teacher” to avoid the use of sexist language.
    • In a cover letter, don’t write “Dear Sir.” Instead, write “To Whom It May Concern,” or “Dear Hiring Manager.”
  6. Generally, formal writing should be informative rather than emotional. As the author, present a more detached, logical tone and don’t appeal to readers’ emotions to make your points. [14]
    • For example, “It was a heartbreaking scene” is an emotional phrase. Replace it with a more detached, informative statement.
    • Note that this doesn’t mean you're never allowed to express personal opinions in formal writing. But when you do, be sure to do so with strong factual support and compelling figures rather than emotional phrases.
  7. Stick with simple punctuation marks, and be careful to avoid any run-on sentences. End your sentences with periods and join sentence sections together with commas. Limit the use of questions for rhetoric effect in academic writing, and only use question marks when you're asking a specific question, like in a letter. Use other punctuation marks like dashes and semicolons sparingly. [15]
    • As a general rule, never use exclamation points in formal writing. It makes your writing appear excessively emotional.
    • Only use a colon if you are introducing a list. For example, "I will explain 3 issues with our current policy: ... " If in doubt, consult a style guide to make sure your use of a colon is logical and acceptable for formal writing.
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Professionalizing Your Presentation

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  1. In contrast to a creative or informal piece of writing, formal writing should convey a clear point. Tell your readers the point you want to get across and organize your essay so that point is clear. [16] Make sure each paragraph of your essay clearly and directly supports the main point. [17]
    • Start off with a clear thesis statement within the first paragraph. Tell readers the point of the piece and the idea you want to get across. [18]
    • Make sure every paragraph after the introduction supports the thesis. Eliminate any information that is unrelated.
    • Restate the thesis and wrap up the piece with a concise conclusion.
  2. There is no set rule on how long your sentences should be, but writing sentences that are all the same length diminishes the overall quality of your piece. An essay made up of all short sentences sounds too simplistic, while an essay of all long sentences seems wordy and confusing. Alter your sentence construction to come up with sentences of varying length throughout the essay.
    • Check your writing and see if there are sections where you use several short or long sentences in a row. Break up these sections by altering the length on 1 or 2 of these sentences. Consider using transition adverbs like "therefore," "however," "additionally," and "otherwise" to improve the cohesion of your paragraph and enhance the formality of your writing style.
    • Consider shortening long sentences by breaking them into 2 or even 3 separate sentences. Join 2 short sentences with a comma. However, make sure these 2 sentences are not both independent clauses or you might have a run-on sentence.
  3. when you’re finished. Nothing looks less formal than typos, spelling errors, and grammar mistakes. Always proofread your work before submitting it. Look for informal passages, general statements, contractions, and any other issues that make your writing look less formal. Fix these before submitting the work. [19]
    • Try letting someone else read the essay as well. Sometimes you miss your own mistakes when you’ve been working on a piece for hours, and a fresh set of eyes sees things that you didn’t.
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    Not at all! Although you want to write in a professional way that caters to your target audience, you don't want to write in a canned, boring way, either. You still want to your writing relatable and interesting to read!
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      2. ↑ https://writingcenter.gmu.edu/guides/reducing-informality-in-academic-writing
      3. ↑ https://www.antioch.edu/santa-barbara/wp-content/uploads/sites/4/2018/06/Academic-Tone-for-Formal-Writing.pdf
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      2. ↑ https://www.plainlanguage.gov/guidelines/conversational/use-active-voice/
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      4. ↑ https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/subject_specific_writing/professional_technical_writing/tone_in_business_writing.html
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      7. ↑ Tristen Bonacci, MEd. English Teacher. Expert Interview
      8. ↑ https://opentextbc.ca/writingforsuccess/chapter/chapter-5-putting-the-pieces-together-with-a-thesis-statement/
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      10. ↑ https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/editing-and-proofreading/

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      To avoid informal writing, make sure you aren't using any contractions in your paper, for instance by using "did not" instead of "didn't." Additionally, remove any personal pronouns or emotional words like "I think," "Your," and "we should all." Instead, try to give reasons to back up your argument, for example by writing "Osmosis Jones is a powerful teaching tool because..." Combine this with formal language instead of slang, for example by writing "film" rather than "movie," and remember to stick to correct punctuation. To find out more about the differences between informal and formal English, read on!

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