Create more compelling characters by exploring their flaws
When you’re fleshing out characters for a story, pinpointing their flaws is just as critical as determining their virtues! So, if you’re struggling to give your characters realistic negative traits, you’ve come to the right place. There are hundreds of negative character traits to explore, which is why we’ve compiled a handy collection of traits and their meanings. Plus, we’ve included tips on using negative character traits in your writing, with expert advice from professional writer Grant Faulkner and acting skills coach Tara Blau Smollen. Without further ado, let’s dive in!
Quick Examples of Negative Character Traits
- Emotional traits: Anxious, frenetic, insecure, maudlin, nihilistic, paranoid
- Social traits: Abrasive, antisocial, boastful, callous, insolent, snobby, tactless
- Behavioral traits: Aggressive, brash, cantankerous, devious, lewd, selfish, vindictive
- Cognitive traits: Apathetic, flaky, gullible, humorless, morbid, weak-willed
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How to Use Negative Character Traits in Writing
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1Create flawed and relatable characters. Everyone has flaws and negative traits; it’s part of being human. And, as Blau Smollen says, “The most compelling people or villains are the ones that are not just two-sided but have a lot of layers to them, like an onion.” [4] X Expert Source Tara Blau Smollen
Presentation & Acting Skills Coach Expert Interview So, give your characters (including the protagonist) realistic flaws to make them more relatable to readers.- When readers can identify with a character and their flaws, it makes the whole story more entertaining!
- For example, you could have a protagonist who struggles with insecurity or anxiety, which are both things that many people deal with in real life, too.
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2Use negative traits to drive a character or story’s conflict. “I think the most important thing about a character in the novel is for the author to know what drives that character, what motivates them, what the character's desire is, and what stands in the way of the character achieving that desire,” says Faulkner. [5] X Expert Source Grant Faulkner, MA
Professional Writer Expert Interview See if you can find flaws by fleshing out a character’s motivations ; you can then use those flaws to create internal and external conflict throughout the story.- Internal conflict occurs within the character’s mind; for example, a resentful character might struggle internally with overcoming their bitterness and learning to forgive.
- External conflict occurs between characters and outside forces; for example, a flaky or jealous character might hurt the protagonist, causing a rift between them that gets resolved by the end of the story.
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3Foreshadow a character’s future arc with their negative traits. As we’ve already mentioned, negative traits don’t have to stay exactly as they are; a character can grow and learn from them. So, when you define a character’s most significant flaws at the beginning of a story, it also reveals to readers what those characters will have to overcome to grow (or what their ultimate downfall will be). [6] X Research source
- For example, a hero who overthinks everything might need to manage those anxieties to finally succeed.
- On the other hand, a cowardly character might end up losing to the protagonist or receiving their just reward due to their cowardice.
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4Make realistic villains with negative traits. A truly great villain shouldn’t be evil just because. “Think about writing an autobiography of the character, and think about what has made them come to this,” Blau Smollen recommends. “Are they as horrible as we think they are?” [7] X Expert Source Tara Blau Smollen
Presentation & Acting Skills Coach Expert Interview In other words, give your villains a real reason to do the things they do, and characteristics that influence their actions, making them the villains they are.- For example, your villain could be authoritarian and destructive because they fear it’s the only way to protect the things they love most.
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References
- ↑ https://thelittlebookish.com/blogs/news/negative-character-traits
- ↑ https://characterhub.com/blog/oc-ideas/1001-character-traits
- ↑ https://characterhub.com/blog/oc-ideas/1001-character-traits
- ↑ Tara Blau Smollen. Presentation & Acting Skills Coach. Expert Interview
- ↑ Grant Faulkner, MA. Professional Writer. Expert Interview
- ↑ https://thelittlebookish.com/blogs/news/negative-character-traits
- ↑ Tara Blau Smollen. Presentation & Acting Skills Coach. Expert Interview
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