How to Write Detective Stories

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Writing a detective story is a fantastic idea for passing your time. If you have a liking for mystery and detection, this is a great pastime for you!

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  1. It may be any time, any place, from Ancient Egypt to the future.
    • Have a thorough study about what happened in any country; any kind of murder,theft or robbery, any kind of strange case known. If the case never closed, you could make it end in any way you please.
  2. He or she could be tough, perceptive or patient, or perhaps all three. Being thorough in this step can help you write a believable story based on a complete and well-rounded main character, so some suggestions for things to consider are offered here: [1]
    • Think of the basics. Male or female? What is the detective's name? How old are they? What do they look like (hair color, eye color, and skin tone)? Where are they from? Where are they living when your story starts? How did they become part of the story? Are they victims? Are they the cause of the problems in your story?
    • Develop a family for your character. Parents? Siblings? Significant other? Children? Other relations? Sociably problematic groups? A character which may know everything but has disappeared... Make it as normal or as quirky as you want!
    • What kind of life do they live? Are they famous, or are they just starting out? Are they unexpectedly smart? What kind of mysteries do they solve? (Murder, theft, a combination, other kinds?)
    • Develop their tastes. Favorite sentence to say? What is their favorite color? Place to be? Soft drink? Book? TV show? Movie? Music? Meal? What are they afraid of? How practical are they? Do they wear a scent, and if so, what scent? Strong, soft, nice or not pleasant?
    • Develop their relationships. Do they have a lot of friends? A best friend? Are they romantic? What first impression do they make? Do they like children? Do they like smokers? Do they like reading?
    • How do they dress? Do they use makeup or hair dye? How about piercings or tattoos? How attractive are they, and how attractive do they think they are? Is there something they wish they could change, or something they are particularly happy with? How much time do they spend thinking about physical appearance?
    • Though this may seem like a lot to worry about for a short story, having your characters developed to the fullest is an essential part of writing a good story and to making the character believable.
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    • Use Who? What? When? Where? Why? How? questions to get you started: Who committed the crime and who did they do it to? What was the crime? When did it happen (morning, evening, afternoon, dead of night)? Where did it happen? Why did they do it? How did they do it?
    • Use this skeleton to more fully sketch out a summary of your plot, with as many details as you can think of at this point. By now, plot ideas will be boiling around in your brain. Don't even worry about putting them in order, just write them down somewhere so that you don't forget them later!
  4. This is an especially important part of your story, so take the time to really develop it fully. Try to describe every single detail so that the reader can picture the crime scene. What does it look like? Is it different by day than by night?.
  5. Go back and look at the questions you used for forming the protagonist, and develop the antagonist's personality just as fully. In particular, think about their relationship to the protagonist.
  6. Make sure you have all of your ducks in a row before you begin writing. [2]
    • Make a list of the suspects. Detail their basic personality.
    • Do the same for witnesses and any other characters.
    • Be sure to have in mind how the mystery is solved!
  7. [3] The detective work must be good. Develop how your protagonist ultimately solves the case, keeping their personality and qualities in mind. Make sure it isn't cheesy or too obvious.
  8. Start with an introductory chapter or two, to introduce the characters and setting. Then make the crime scene happen.
  9. Introduce the suspects and witnesses.You may include their looks,height(tall or short),expressions,what might be the perception of others towards her,etc. For example: "Annie entered the office. She was a tall woman with thin legs and hands. Her face looks like a diamond...". Make sure that you give the reader a vivid picture of each character.
  10. The more suspense you insert into the unfolding of the story, the more interesting the story will be. Make the protagonist get stuck in a couple of impossible-seeming situations and obstacles. Don't make the mystery too easy to solve! [4]
    George R.R. Martin, Writer

    Find continuous ways to engage the reader. "I end each chapter with a cliffhanger, resolution, a turn, a reveal, a new wrinkle ... something that will make you want to read the next chapter of that character."

  11. Be sure the ending is clear on who committed the crime and why, and how it was solved. There is nothing worse than leaving a mystery story extremely confused about what was going on!
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    Check the story a couple of times and make sure that there are no mistakes. Rewrite as needed, and reword dull passages to make them more interesting. Cut out as many unnecessary fillers as you can. You want your story to be the best that it can be.
    • If you are writing a book for the first time, write a short story.
    • The story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end. It can be 1500 to 2000 words. That can be a great training ground for writing a book.
    • Flash fiction is a great place to start. There are many opportunities to publish flash fiction online and in magazines.
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    Should there always be a friend of the detective who writes the mystery for him?
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    No, it's up to you whether you want to have a friend tell the story. You can have the detective telling the story, or you can have a narrator. You also don't want to have a friend narrating just because that is how it is done in Sherlock Holmes. Come up with your own unique ideas.
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    Is it a good idea to tell the story in the form of a journal in the first person?
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    Yes, it is. That way you can elaborate on how the person feels and describe all his emotions more effectively than you could from the third person perspective.
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    Can I write about an accident?
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    You could, but usually a detective wouldn't be investigating something that was ruled an accident. So there would have to be some kind of suspicious circumstances involved.
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      • Always write, check, then check again. Your story should be checked at least three or four times to make certain it makes sense.
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      • Observe everyone and everything. You don't know where your next plot idea might come from, so stay sharp!
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      • Come up with a good title for your story––it has to be as attractive as you can imagine. If you need help, ask people for ideas, they don't have to be friends. It can be really obvious, or really vague about why it is the title, make it seem like it tells everything about the story but it doesn't reveal the main point about it. Vague titles can be really cool. Make sure it is a title that would get your reader interested. For example, "The Big Mystery" sounds like a kindergarten reader, while something like "Mysteries of midnight" sounds very dramatic. It tells about the story, something happens at midnight but it doesn't tell what is about.
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      • Be original. Copying others might make you feel good, but you need to understand that other people may have put a lot of effort in their work and wouldn't like it at all if you copied them. This might also lead you to be fined.
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      • A crime in a detective story must never turn out to be an accident or a suicide. To end an odyssey of sleuthing with such an anti-climax is to hoodwink the trusting and kind-hearted reader.
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      • Make sure that the culprit must be determined by logical deductions — not by accident or coincidence or unmotivated confession. To solve a criminal problem in this latter fashion is like sending the reader on a deliberate wild-goose chase, and then telling him, after he has failed, that you had the object of his search up your sleeve all the time. Such an author is no better than a practical joker.
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      • .The detective story must have a detective in it; and a detective is not a detective unless he detects. His function is to gather clues that will eventually lead to the person who did the dirty work in the first chapter
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      • The detective himself, or one of the official investigators, must never turn out to be the culprit. This spoils your whole story.
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      1. ↑ https://www.goodwin.edu/enews/police-officer-qualities-and-qualifications/
      2. ↑ https://www.readingrockets.org/article/103-things-do-during-or-after-reading
      3. ↑ https://leb.fbi.gov/articles/perspective/perspective-need-for-critical-thinking-in-police-training/
      4. ↑ https://www.theguardian.com/childrens-books-site/2016/jan/26/tips-writing-detective-fiction

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